You are the world (1)
You feel are as warm as Stone Harbor’s summer day (3 & 5)
You glisten to the beat of the sun (2)
The sound of your waves crashing sing the words of my heart (3 &19)
You taste salty and blue (3 & 4)
You feel strong (3)
You look powerful and big (3)
You are welcoming and always say “Kaila mi casa es tu casa” (5 & 18)
And I say, Kaila’s house is your house
Soon, you will grow stronger, and your waves will grow smaller (15 & 9)
But, it is important to live in the moment, because these could be our last
Remember YOLO (8)
You are small (6 &7)
Small enough for me to carry around with me the rest of my life
You are the greatest ocean of beauty (11)
You make up me (17)
Kaila, I like how you saved up telling what the object was until the end. You did a great job describing it too, I loved when you used You taste salty and You feel strong. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteYour poem is so deep! I found it inspiring!
ReplyDeleteThis is very well done Kaila I loved the Yolo line as well nice touch
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